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Create an annotated bibliography based on your approved research topic. Step 1: Use the 3 credible sources from your “Finding Sources and Completing the CRAAP Test” and the “Quoting, Paraphrasing, and Summarizing” (these should be the same sources) for your supporting evidence paragraphs. Step 2 Create your annotated bibliography. Once you have selected your resources, create a document that includes the following for each resource. Author(s), date of publication, title, and source type. A summary (at least five sentences) of the source. What is it about? What are the main points? What conclusions are reached, and how are they supported? Why is this source useful or relevant to your topic? How might you use it to support an argument of your own? All answers should be written in complete sentences, and MLA 9th edition format should be used when writing your responses. You MUST write each sources summary in your own words. Do NOT copy word-for-word from the articles abstract. Plagiarism will not be tolerated. Please use this template or format as shown in the example below it. Your annotated bibliography must be formatted as such.

Final Instructions for TOK Essay Rewrite and Improvement

Please rewrite and refine my Theory of Knowledge (TOK) essay so that it achieves a Level 910 according to the IB TOK Essay Assessment Criteria. The essay must fully comply with IB academic standards and expectations.

ALSO USE THE CORRECTIONS ATTATCHED

1. Prescribed Title

• The essay must be written strictly in response to the prescribed title:
• In the production of knowledge, does it matter that observation is an essential but flawed tool?
• The discussion must remain explicitly linked to this title throughout the essay.
• The Areas of Knowledge examined must be:
• Natural Sciences
• Human Sciences (Business Management)

2. Introduction

• Clearly introduce the prescribed title.
• Define and clarify key terms relevant to the investigation, including:
• Observation
• Essential
• Flawed
• Production of knowledge
• Formulate a focused knowledge question derived from the title.
• Present a clear and coherent line of argument that will guide the essay.

3. Focus and Relevance

• Maintain a consistent and explicit focus on the prescribed title throughout the essay.
• Every paragraph must clearly link back to:
• The knowledge question
• The role of observation in knowledge production
• The relevant Area of Knowledge
• Avoid purely descriptive content; prioritize analysis and evaluation.

4. Areas of Knowledge Analysis

A. Natural Sciences

• Examine the role of observation in producing scientific knowledge.
• Discuss how observation is essential (e.g., empirical data, experimentation, technological instruments).
• Critically evaluate how observation is flawed (e.g., measurement error, observer bias, theory-ladenness).
• Present claims and counterclaims regarding whether flawed observation undermines scientific knowledge.
• Use specific real-world examples (e.g., experiments, scientific discoveries, historical cases).
• Consider the implications of flawed observation for the reliability and objectivity of scientific knowledge.

B. Human Sciences (Business Management)

• Examine how observation is used to produce knowledge in Business Management (e.g., market research, consumer behavior analysis, performance metrics).
• Discuss why observation is essential (e.g., identifying trends, informing decision-making, strategic planning).
• Critically evaluate the limitations of observation, including:
• Human bias in interpreting data
• Influence of assumptions and expectations
• Ethical and cultural constraints
• Present claims and counterclaims on the reliability of observational data in business contexts.
• Use concrete business-related examples (e.g., market surveys, case studies, financial performance analysis).
• Consider how flawed observation affects the validity of business decisions and theories.

5. Argumentation and Critical Thinking

• The essay must be argumentative and analytical, not narrative.
• Arguments should be:
• Logically structured
• Clearly explained
• Supported by relevant real-world examples
• Evaluate the strengths and weaknesses of observation as a tool in each AOK.
• Explicitly consider the implications of flawed observation for knowledge production.

6. Comparison Between Areas of Knowledge

• Where relevant, draw comparisons between:
• How observation is used in Natural Sciences versus Business Management
• The degree to which flaws in observation impact knowledge reliability in each AOK
• Highlight both similarities and differences in methodological approaches.

7. Structure and Organization

• The essay must follow a clear and logical structure:
• Introduction
• Main body (separate, well-developed sections for each AOK)
• Conclusion
• Ensure smooth transitions between sections and ideas.

8. Conclusion

• Directly answer the prescribed title.
• Synthesize insights from both Natural Sciences and Human Sciences (Business Management).
• Avoid introducing new examples or arguments.
• Emphasize why the flawed nature of observation matters differently across AOKs.

9. Research and CitationsNO AI OR PLAGERISM, MUST SEND ME REPORT OF TURN

• Include insightful and convincing research.
• Use appropriate in-text citations.
• Properly acknowledge all external sources in a reference list.
• Ensure sources support evaluation rather than replace analysis.

10. Language, Style, and Word Limit

• Use clear, precise, and formal academic language suitable for TOK.
• Stay within the IB word limit.
• Ensure the final essay is coherent, polished, and consistently focused on the knowledge question.

Please make an artist statement about me

Don’t use any AI or chatgpt and please submit the plagiarism percentage from gptzero and turnitin

Make sure to answer all these questions in the artist statement

Consider asking yourself these questions:

What am I doing?

How am I doing it?

Why am I doing it?

What influences me most?

How does my art relate to the art of my contemporaries?

What do I want other people to understand about my art?

Am I unwilling to discuss any aspects of my work? If so, why?

Down below I’ve attached some files of and photo of my artwork that you need to talk just little bit in the artist statement. Make sure to look Entry #2 file and Journal Week 2. I’m pretty much already answered all the questions you just need to add more things and turn it into full essay artist statement. For a file titled Artist Statement is the example of the essay it’s not a good sample and there’s Artist Statement-Writing in Art_Introduction- 1.pdf are also the sample of it.

I’ve attached the last draft of the essay that you’ll need to change under

“Personal Essay Draft Submissiondocx.pdf”

This is the last comment and what I need to change or edit :

I’m going to give you feedback on your artist statement as a reader response so that way you can use it to do your final revision so there’s a lot of good things in this but there’s some things that we also need to work on and revise as well so the biggest thing I’m going to talk about is your argument so in your first paragraph it looks like you want your argument to be when they meeting the the viewer listen to a song I want the viewers to feel the same thing when they see it art to me as language that does not require words in interpretation so since this is an artist statement it should be more along the lines of why should your art matter or why should people look at your art so I think that you explain that a little bit better in the to me individuals may exist in more than one place and identity simultaneously and that’s what my artistic practices based on so maybe something more along the lines of you want people to understand the Multicultural flow as you put it in that same paragraph that individuals have and to for them to understand that so maybe you can revise your argument to as such and then that will be a little bit more clear and concise and then as far as the rest of it we have do you have this connection to music which I think is fine and then you say that you have a recycled use materials so you’re talking about the mediums that you use you compare it to Music Creation so that’s kind of like your process and you have a little bit about like the emotion that you want them to understand but you have a lot of ideas here and I want to make sure that you are answering the you know how does your art relate to the art of your contemporaries you do have what influences you which is your culture and music and being Indonesian but I think that it would be best if you were a little bit more specific about that so maybe you can talk about your process of making the particular piece that you put a picture of and you can answer more specifically you know what are you doing how am I doing it why am I doing it give us more specifics about that particular piece and then how it shows that duality of cultures that you’re talking about and so that way instead of just all these ideas and these generalities you have something more specific there so that way we have an example that we can anchor ourselves in and then make sure you are addressing that question of how does your art relate to the art of your contemporaries so that way we have that answered as well.

Please make an artist statement about me

Don’t use any AI or chatgpt and please submit the plagiarism percentage from gptzero and turnitin

Make sure to answer all these questions in the artist statement

Consider asking yourself these questions:

What am I doing?

How am I doing it?

Why am I doing it?

What influences me most?

How does my art relate to the art of my contemporaries?

What do I want other people to understand about my art?

Am I unwilling to discuss any aspects of my work? If so, why?

Down below I’ve attached some files of and photo of my artwork that you need to talk just little bit in the artist statement. Make sure to look Entry #2 file and Journal Week 2. I’m pretty much already answered all the questions you just need to add more things and turn it into full essay artist statement. For a file titled Artist Statement is the example of the essay it’s not a good sample and there’s Artist Statement-Writing in Art_Introduction- 1.pdf are also the sample of it.

I’ve attached the last draft of the essay that you’ll need to change under

“Personal Essay Draft Submissiondocx.pdf”

This is the last comment and what I need to change or edit :

I’m going to give you feedback on your artist statement as a reader response so that way you can use it to do your final revision so there’s a lot of good things in this but there’s some things that we also need to work on and revise as well so the biggest thing I’m going to talk about is your argument so in your first paragraph it looks like you want your argument to be when they meeting the the viewer listen to a song I want the viewers to feel the same thing when they see it art to me as language that does not require words in interpretation so since this is an artist statement it should be more along the lines of why should your art matter or why should people look at your art so I think that you explain that a little bit better in the to me individuals may exist in more than one place and identity simultaneously and that’s what my artistic practices based on so maybe something more along the lines of you want people to understand the Multicultural flow as you put it in that same paragraph that individuals have and to for them to understand that so maybe you can revise your argument to as such and then that will be a little bit more clear and concise and then as far as the rest of it we have do you have this connection to music which I think is fine and then you say that you have a recycled use materials so you’re talking about the mediums that you use you compare it to Music Creation so that’s kind of like your process and you have a little bit about like the emotion that you want them to understand but you have a lot of ideas here and I want to make sure that you are answering the you know how does your art relate to the art of your contemporaries you do have what influences you which is your culture and music and being Indonesian but I think that it would be best if you were a little bit more specific about that so maybe you can talk about your process of making the particular piece that you put a picture of and you can answer more specifically you know what are you doing how am I doing it why am I doing it give us more specifics about that particular piece and then how it shows that duality of cultures that you’re talking about and so that way instead of just all these ideas and these generalities you have something more specific there so that way we have an example that we can anchor ourselves in and then make sure you are addressing that question of how does your art relate to the art of your contemporaries so that way we have that answered as well.

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