Category: English

  • Free Speech

    • One way of celebrating the right to free speech is by complaining about things that we find wrong in our world.
    • Generate some examples of issues that our society has ceased to complain about. Your list should have at least 5 new items.
      • Post: 80%
      • Two Replies:20%
      • Total: 100%
    • Grade Breakdown Per Post:

    • Write at least one full paragraph. In addition to your initial post, respond to two other classmates’ posts.

    Requirements: 350

  • Bassam music

    Assignment 1

    The “Hound Dog” television scandal

    Elvis’ performance of “Hound Dog” on the Milton Berle show was a scandal in the 1950’s. Why do think his performance was so shocking to a mainstream audience? Think of a modern music performance-related scandal and why it was shocking. Do you think that we will perceive the performance to be as scandalous in 10 years?

    example 1

    The “Hound Dog” television scandal was shocking to a mainstream audience because the dancing and movements were very provocative and sexual, which the mainstream public had never seen before. These movements seem pretty tame nowadays compared to some other modern artists, however in the 1950’s it was very scandalous. A modern musical performance-related scandal is Sabrina Carpenter’s most recent tour, where she had many sexual dances which were much more provocative than the ones done by Elvis in the 1950’s. I do not believe that we would find this performance scandalous in 10 years as even now many people are accepting the performances as just simply art, and thus don’t criticize it as being too sexual.

    Example 2

    I think Elviss performance of Hound Dog was so shocking at the time because people werent used to seeing that kind of movement on TV, especially in a more conservative era where everything was expected to be appropriate. A modern example I think of is Travis Scotts Astroworld Festival, which was shocking because of how chaotic and unsafe the crowd situation became during his performance. I dont think either would be seen as that scandalous in 10 years because peoples views on performances and whats considered shocking are always changing.

    Assignment 2

    Covers vs. Originals

    This week, a number of musical examples are covers of other existing songs. Choose a cover song and its original recordings and discuss the differences between the two, and which version is the “definitive” version. Below are some examples from this week, or you can choose one you are already familiar with (please embed the videos here for comparison). It may be helpful to think about the notion of appropriation in some cases.

    • “Blue Suede Shoes” – Carl Perkins v. Elvis Presley
    • “Hound Dog” – Big Mama Thornton v. Elvis
    • “Tutti Frutti” – Little Richard v. Pat Boone
    • “The Twist” – Hank Ballard v. Chubby Checker

    example 1

    Big Mama Thornton first sang Hound Dog in 1952. Her version sounds like blues music and is slower and more serious. She sings it in a strong and powerful way. Elvis Presley made his version later, and his is much faster and more exciting. His version became more famous, but Big Mama Thorntons song feels more real and closer to the original style.

    Example 2

    I chose Tutti Frutti by Little Richard and the cover by Pat Boone because the differences between them are really noticeable. Little Richards version is loud, energetic, and feels more natural, while Pat Boones version sounds more toned down and controlled. Boones version feels like it was made to be safer for a wider audience, especially at the time. I think Little Richards version is the definitive one because it has more personality and better captures the song’s original style

    Requirements: Follow

  • Marleen music

    Assignment 1

    The “Hound Dog” television scandal

    Elvis’ performance of “Hound Dog” on the Milton Berle show was a scandal in the 1950’s. Why do think his performance was so shocking to a mainstream audience? Think of a modern music performance-related scandal and why it was shocking. Do you think that we will perceive the performance to be as scandalous in 10 years?

    example 1

    The “Hound Dog” television scandal was shocking to a mainstream audience because the dancing and movements were very provocative and sexual, which the mainstream public had never seen before. These movements seem pretty tame nowadays compared to some other modern artists, however in the 1950’s it was very scandalous. A modern musical performance-related scandal is Sabrina Carpenter’s most recent tour, where she had many sexual dances which were much more provocative than the ones done by Elvis in the 1950’s. I do not believe that we would find this performance scandalous in 10 years as even now many people are accepting the performances as just simply art, and thus don’t criticize it as being too sexual.

    Example 2

    I think Elviss performance of Hound Dog was so shocking at the time because people werent used to seeing that kind of movement on TV, especially in a more conservative era where everything was expected to be appropriate. A modern example I think of is Travis Scotts Astroworld Festival, which was shocking because of how chaotic and unsafe the crowd situation became during his performance. I dont think either would be seen as that scandalous in 10 years because peoples views on performances and whats considered shocking are always changing.

    Assignment 2

    Covers vs. Originals

    This week, a number of musical examples are covers of other existing songs. Choose a cover song and its original recordings and discuss the differences between the two, and which version is the “definitive” version. Below are some examples from this week, or you can choose one you are already familiar with (please embed the videos here for comparison). It may be helpful to think about the notion of appropriation in some cases.

    • “Blue Suede Shoes” – Carl Perkins v. Elvis Presley
    • “Hound Dog” – Big Mama Thornton v. Elvis
    • “Tutti Frutti” – Little Richard v. Pat Boone
    • “The Twist” – Hank Ballard v. Chubby Checker

    example 1

    Big Mama Thornton first sang Hound Dog in 1952. Her version sounds like blues music and is slower and more serious. She sings it in a strong and powerful way. Elvis Presley made his version later, and his is much faster and more exciting. His version became more famous, but Big Mama Thorntons song feels more real and closer to the original style.

    Example 2

    I chose Tutti Frutti by Little Richard and the cover by Pat Boone because the differences between them are really noticeable. Little Richards version is loud, energetic, and feels more natural, while Pat Boones version sounds more toned down and controlled. Boones version feels like it was made to be safer for a wider audience, especially at the time. I think Little Richards version is the definitive one because it has more personality and better captures the song’s original style

    Requirements: Follow

  • Wissam music

    Assignment 1

    The “Hound Dog” television scandal

    Elvis’ performance of “Hound Dog” on the Milton Berle show was a scandal in the 1950’s. Why do think his performance was so shocking to a mainstream audience? Think of a modern music performance-related scandal and why it was shocking. Do you think that we will perceive the performance to be as scandalous in 10 years?

    example 1

    The “Hound Dog” television scandal was shocking to a mainstream audience because the dancing and movements were very provocative and sexual, which the mainstream public had never seen before. These movements seem pretty tame nowadays compared to some other modern artists, however in the 1950’s it was very scandalous. A modern musical performance-related scandal is Sabrina Carpenter’s most recent tour, where she had many sexual dances which were much more provocative than the ones done by Elvis in the 1950’s. I do not believe that we would find this performance scandalous in 10 years as even now many people are accepting the performances as just simply art, and thus don’t criticize it as being too sexual.

    Example 2

    I think Elviss performance of Hound Dog was so shocking at the time because people werent used to seeing that kind of movement on TV, especially in a more conservative era where everything was expected to be appropriate. A modern example I think of is Travis Scotts Astroworld Festival, which was shocking because of how chaotic and unsafe the crowd situation became during his performance. I dont think either would be seen as that scandalous in 10 years because peoples views on performances and whats considered shocking are always changing.

    Assignment 2

    Covers vs. Originals

    This week, a number of musical examples are covers of other existing songs. Choose a cover song and its original recordings and discuss the differences between the two, and which version is the “definitive” version. Below are some examples from this week, or you can choose one you are already familiar with (please embed the videos here for comparison). It may be helpful to think about the notion of appropriation in some cases.

    • “Blue Suede Shoes” – Carl Perkins v. Elvis Presley
    • “Hound Dog” – Big Mama Thornton v. Elvis
    • “Tutti Frutti” – Little Richard v. Pat Boone
    • “The Twist” – Hank Ballard v. Chubby Checker

    example 1

    Big Mama Thornton first sang Hound Dog in 1952. Her version sounds like blues music and is slower and more serious. She sings it in a strong and powerful way. Elvis Presley made his version later, and his is much faster and more exciting. His version became more famous, but Big Mama Thorntons song feels more real and closer to the original style.

    Example 2

    I chose Tutti Frutti by Little Richard and the cover by Pat Boone because the differences between them are really noticeable. Little Richards version is loud, energetic, and feels more natural, while Pat Boones version sounds more toned down and controlled. Boones version feels like it was made to be safer for a wider audience, especially at the time. I think Little Richards version is the definitive one because it has more personality and better captures the song’s original style

    Requirements: Follow

  • English Question

    I need a comparisons essay, block by block style on gas vehicles vs elcectric. It has to be cited and have references. I need in 1 day

    Requirements:

  • Arugmentative Essay

    An essay over the effectiveness of foreign aid on the development of countries. I am in High School and want my letter to reflect that kind of grammar/speech. I am a senior. I will be attaching an outline document so its easier to write the essay and you know what is required for the paper. I will also attach a rubric as well as the 5 sources that are needed to be used. Each one must be used at least once. I would like you to fill out the outline.docx, if you want to also put that info into a final essay for me that would be great. Everything needed is in this zip file.

  • Is social media harmful for kids

    its an argumentative essay about is social media harmful for kids
  • Arugmentative Essay

    An essay over the effectiveness of foreign aid on the development of countries. I am in High School and want my letter to reflect that kind of grammar/speech. I am a senior. I will be attaching an outline document so its easier to write the essay and you know what is required for the paper. I will also attach a rubric as well as the 5 sources that are needed to be used. Each one must be used at least once. I would like you to fill out the outline.docx, if you want to also put that info into a final essay for me that would be great. Everything needed is in this zip file.

  • Mod 8 peer review augmented

    Write peer responses for 2 of your peers’ drafts. Each peer response should be at least 200 original words (minimum 400 words total), not counting the words in the peer response questions themselves. Read as many drafts as you can. Reading several of your peers’ drafts will give you a better sense of the different ways in which your peers have approached this writing project. As you read, think critically about how well each peer builds their arguments and uses “They Say” quotes and paraphrases to help support their “I Say” in response to the closed research theme question. Make a mental note of interesting and effective points and arguments. Choose drafts to review. Choose 2 drafts that have not yet received any feedback to respond to in detail. NOTE: To ensure that ALL students in your group receive feedback, it is important that you first respond to drafts that have received NO feedback yet. If all drafts have received feedback, then look for a draft that has only received feedback from one person. DO NOT respond to a draft that has already received feedback from two other peers unless no other options are available. Download each draft to your computer and save them with a name that will make them easy to identify later. Write your peer responses. For each response, respond to at least 3 of the total 5 peer response questions listed below (A, B, C, D, and/or E), choosing questions based on which you think will be most help to each peer. Write your answers on the last page of the downloaded copies of the drafts you have selected and label each answer with the letter that corresponds with the question answered. Provide as many specifics as possible, quoting from your peers drafts as applicable, referring to specific paragraphs or sentences, and providing specific suggestions for improvement. In addition, you may make marginal comments or highlights on your peers’ drafts using Track Changes function or by changing the color of your writing using the Font Color button in the Home toolbar. This is optional but encouraged. Peer Response Questions: A. A clear main point. Analyze the drafts thesis statement. First, identify the thesis statement and restate it in your own words (or, if you cant identify a single thesis statement, note this and state the overall or central argument you think your peer is trying to make). Does the thesis need expansion or revision? Is the purpose of the argument clear? Is the focus of the main argument maintained throughout the essay? What works best? What is missing? B. Appropriate, accessible support. Analyze the drafts use of support and evidence. Is the evidence relevant and sufficient? Is there a mix of facts and examples? Are all claims sufficiently supported? Is the “They Say” of the sources distinct from the writer’s “I Say”? Which claims could be made stronger with additional or different support? Is any evidence weak, misleading, or inappropriate? Is the evidence well-chosen to persuade the intended audience? What works best? What is missing? C. Reasoning and explanations. Analyze the reasoning and explanations used to ground the arguments made. Is the reasoning sound? Are the “I Say” explanations thorough and clear? Do the conclusions follow logically from the evidence and claims? Do you note any logical fallacies or flaws in reasoning? Does the argument seem ultimately convincing? What works best? What is missing? D. Organization. Analyze the organization of the draft. Does the overall organization of the draft help make the arguments made and the evidence presented clear and understandable? Are the arguments or claims made arranged so that they build on each other? Does the draft effectively use topic sentences and transitions? What works best? What is missing? E. One important, specific change. If you could take over this draft and make one important change or revision in the audience, thesis, content, or organization, what would you change, and why? Be specific and constructive. (Note: Do not comment on grammar here but focus on content and organization.)
  • English Question

    Subject: Nurse Staffin

    Write an essay (of around 750 words) that critiques one text you have found in your research as part of the ongoing semester research project.

    The main goal of this critique is to provide a detailed overview of that text to help your audience learn about your position on the writing selection and also to help your audience decide for themselves whether or not the writing selection is something they might be interested in reading.

    The critique should include all of the following:

    • an introduction that names the text being critiqued, and author(s)
    • a brief summary of the text
    • a brief evaluation of the text (use the to evaluate your sources)
    • a detailed explanation of at least three reasons why this text has value to you/your thesis
      • develop each one in its own paragraph, explaining one specific takeaway that you believe could be used to support your thesis
    • final impression

    Textual evidence should be incorporated into the critique essay. Refer to Content >> Guide A: Using and Citing Sources as needed.

    You will find a sample Critique Essay (sourced from Krause, Steven D. Eds. Jennifer McCann and Nanci Love. . Designed by the Bay College Online Learning Department and Bay College Library) on the following page.

    Course materials to assist you in writing this essay follow throughout Unit 2. Continue to read through all of the Unit 2 content.

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    Post a full Rough Draft of your essay as an attachment.

    Include a brief note for your instructor and fellow students that explains, in detail, at least three specific worries/concerns you have about your paper.

    Be sure to post by the deadline listed on the syllabus/schedule. The day this thread closes/locks is the day the peer review is due, which is not the same as when your own draft is due; your own rough draft is always due days earlier to ensure enough drafts are posted for peers to review.

    Requirements: 760