Portfolio:
Content: Edit Content. You are not listing the Bio, statemetn and the CV, along with the contact as part of your content page. Pleas ere-design to include these. Alternatively, re-arrange the order pf page so yo ucan resolve this in a creative manner. Alignment inconsistency with the title and the paeg numbers. Add a white background to the drawings they are too blended with the background. Edit the CV as per the feedback written below. Avoid placing it as an image and rather place the content as text on Indesign your font size should remain consistent. You should start with Biography, followed by the statement. Statement: third paragraph needs re-phrasing in noticable parts due to spelling mistakes, typos, and/ or incorrect grammer. Biography: double spacing at the first sentence. Also, why do you need from/ at Zayed..? There are double spacing and some sentences that require re-phrasing and re-writing. I had requested that you pay a visit to Al Waha in my project I feedback, so I advise to do the same again to refine this writing, and revert back to show me the progress on the week of April 13th before the portfolio submission o nthe portal. Typo with purpose. Also, this is a quote by who? Place quotaion marks and write the source. There is a white line on the top part of the orange/ brown background either bleed this image or fill the stroke. Wall Luminaire: capitalise softwares so Illustrator. Place your page numebrs. Next page: An exhibition… Next page: Alignment inconsistency with the text. Imaegs can be placed in a better grid alignment. Page 26: statement needs attention. Page 28: typo with Drawing. There are a lot of those inconsistencies and spelling mistakes or grammer inaccruacy that seems to have been placed ina rush. Please read every sentence and review every word to apply appropriate edits throughout all of your documents. There is no senior project pages which was a clear requirement. The Nissan car key project is unnecessary amongst tese Interior Design focused projects. It is clear the work was concluded in a rush despite offering ample of feedback sessions and resources.
Documentation: Selected projects need further edits. See notes above.
Branding: The branding guidelines are lacking required details including your name, choosing 3 keywords rather than 5, adding the font examples as a reference rather than just the name, and adding more of yoru clors that you have used in the portfolio and the CV. You have used shapes as well that seem to be part of your branding identity, so they needed to be included. Colors should be added with their codes as well. The brief is clear in its requirements, along with the presentation, and the recorded video lesson. I have reviewed these components with all students on the last feedback session as well which was the expectation. Edit this document.
CV: The CV can be further designed to follow your branding, using Adobe softwares. This looks like a Canva tempalte and all students were required to design using Adobe softwares, not Canva. This is CV is the same as in project I so not sure if any edits were made? After the CV updates and the EDAAD workshops? For instance, it was advised to remove high school mention in the CV. Also, you have a lot of inconsistent font sizes, and formats still. Why is the Certificate in such a large font for the title and the content? References are missing? And in project I you hadnt completed this requirement well so this is consideerd an incomplete componet at this stage. Its been two months since we had feedback regarding the CV. Edit accordingly.
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Overall, the submited work is rushed and is showcasing some inaccuracies and inconsistencies. Please improve on your time management to progress your project well, rather than leaving a big chunk at the end of it. The branding needs to be more visible in your CV, and your branding guidelines needs to be edited. Edit accordingly.
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