To write this essay, you need a vocabulary that matches the Bosss coldness. We are moving away from passive verbs. We are moving toward Power Verbs. 1 Subjugate: To bring under domination. The Boss subjugates the fly to feel the power he lost in the War. 2 Obscure: To conceal. The Boss uses his neat office to obscure the mess of his soul. 3 Validate: To prove. The flys struggle validates the Bosss belief in vigor over weakness. 4 Precipitate: To cause a sudden collapse. The death of the fly precipitates the Bosss sudden amnesia. 5 Manifest: To display. The green leather is a manifest symbol of his material success. Digital Flow Drill 3: Write one sentence using the word ‘subjugate’ and an em-dash. Describe the transition from the Boss’s grief to his action. GO. Each of these stories features a ‘God’ that demands a sacrifice. In Poor Liza, it was the princes betrayal. In The Necklace, it was the ten-year debt. In The Fly, it is the Bosss own need for Order. Your synthesis essay will analyze the relationship between Order and Cruelty in The Fly and The Necklace. The Constraints are Non-Negotiable: 3 Semicolons: To hinge your ideas. 2 Colons: To reveal your conclusions. 2 Em-dashes: To cut through the sentiment. 2 Not only / But also structures: To anchor your complexity. All 5 Power Verbs: Subjugate, obscure, validate, precipitate, manifest.
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