substantially Revising and expanding my editorial

in the picture below is my campus editorial which my audience is my fellow students. Now i need this to expand and revise which my audience now is my university administrator. and the instruction you need to make the argument more rhetorically sophisticated, especially in terms of counterargument and concession also i need 5 sources for this. All my professor does is based on how good it is no rubric. And all i wanted is around B- to B. Based on my writing on my editorial it should be a little the same for my essay. Also you could use my stats to use as an example in my class where it is big where everyone barely talks and ask questions plus my economics class in real life experience. lastly i jus need it mid formal

WRITE MY PAPER

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