I want to be straightforward about what I need. I’m attaching three documents: the assignment guidelines, an annotated bibliography of scholarly sources on A Girl Walks Home Alone at Night, and my original essay that received a C. Use the essay as a starting point, but the revised version needs to fix four key weaknesses or you can do a fresh start. First, the textual evidence was too thin the professor wants arguments grounded in specific examples from both texts, but my essay had no direct quotes from Wilde’s play and the film analysis was vague with no real scene descriptions. Second, the formal and stylistic analysis needs more depth things like metaphors, image composition, editing choices, and symbolism. I touched on Salome’s nature imagery but didn’t actually unpack what it means. Third, the sources were used poorly they felt like name-drops rather than being genuinely woven into the argument, and one source felt completely disconnected from the texts. Fourth, the conclusion just repeated the introduction word for word instead of offering something new. On top of all this, the writing came across as AI-generated overall, so the revised version needs to feel like a real human wrote it. Lastly this is the link for the Salome Text
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