I have included the original instructions for the paper + my draft. I need help adding an intro + conclusion plus making edits. I have added all edits below (please review instructions so paper follows what is needed, (e.g. cannot exceed 13 pages)
- reduce repetition (According to Cialdini)
- shorten long sentences
- simplify wording
- especially in authority (Q910) and scarcity (Q11)
- especially Q6 (hazing), Q8 (cooperation), Q11 (scarcity)
- Looking back / This shows / This made me realize
- make them sound smooth and natural
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