This is my graduation project about a clinical trial, i will attach the work we have already done, i need several modifications and additions to the thesis.
– First thing i want you to modify and add to the introduction, it statred with so much detail then overall, i want you to fix it by starting by general info then go into detail about our project, i want you to add or fix the info there, add if needed to make it more organized with complete information. I feel like the introduction is not very efficient i want it modified
– Second thing is. I want to mention in the thesis, but i am not sure where to include this information, maybe in the introduction or which part exactly is the correct part to add this information, but i want to include how this is a new idea that we came up with which ( That we created a new formulation and state it professionally and that this formulation was not done before)
– In the part of the aims of this project, i want to mention 2 aims first that we created a new formulation, to see if there if there is a negative or positive effect and if it is better than the traditional one, second that we are testing and evaluating the efficiency of this product
– There is another thing i want to mention but again not sure in which part to include it in, but i want to mention that to study the efficiency of this product, we could’ve done it better and more pricesly like a randomized clinical trial, but due to the time limit we had we couldnt.
_ for the literature review part, i dont think the way my friends put it is correct. I want you to modify all the parts, first thing i want all the studies regarding irritations to be after each other, the part regarding ulcers after each other, the part regarding the normal traditional wax to be after each other, the part regarding the propolis to be after each other. In addition i think it is not written correctly, for each study i want you to include the type of study, name of the people who did it and the year it was published in before stating what it says. In addition, if you find any more relevant information or studies i want it to be added (please try to find more studies relevant).
– In a study that includes a randomized clinical trial i want you to remove the part where the study states difference between males and females, so it doesnt open a door for discussion.
– In the part of materials and methods, i want you to include that the study was done in the orthodontic clinics in ajman university, it is mentioned just ajman university as a whole.- In the materials and methods i want you to include also the time frame in which we did this study which is a whole month starting from 6 april until 4 may.
– In the sample collection i want you to add the number of participants which is 30.
– In the limitations part, i also want you to add that this study could’ve been more precise and accurate but it would take to much time. Like we coul’ve measured the size and be more accurate but we didnt have the time (once you reach the study you will understand what i mean, you can add the wordings based on that and you can add more info if needed)
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