Business English Proposal 1300 word (revise)

I need you to humanise my business proposal assignment. Here’s what needs doing:

The whole thing needs to sound like a university student wrote it , upper intermediate English, not perfect native level. Right now it reads too polished and uniform, which will get flagged.

Specific things to fix:

  • Vary the sentence lengths and structures throughout , too many sentences follow the same pattern right now
  • Make the vocabulary a bit less precise and corporate in places , swap out overly formal phrases for more natural alternatives
  • Add some slight imperfections in flow that a real student would have, not grammar mistakes, just natural writing roughness
  • The Goals and Project Scope sections are the most robotic, focus there first
  • Keep all the citations, data, and structure exactly as they are , don’t change any numbers, sources, or section headings
  • Keep it formal enough for a business proposal but make it sound like someone who speaks English as a second language at a good level wrote it, not a native professional copywriter

The word count needs to stay within 1300 words for the main body excluding the RFP, tables, figures and reference list, so do make sure on that as well. I will upload the document here, main thing is AI shouldnt be flagged.

WRITE MY PAPER

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