See comments in the document about language. Remove any discussion of research that you did not conduct for this project. Only describe the data that you had access to. Please revise before submitting to your site. Make sure to stay neutral in the paper. Again, only mention what you did. There should be no mention of other phases. These should be suggestions for follow-up. Limit the description of data to only what you used for this report. See comments. Make the changes. Remember to only discuss the scope of this evaluation. Remove the discusison of subsequent phases until the end. Then include them in recommendations. Edit the document. Don’t make judgements or clarifying any position. Maintain a very supportive affirming tone. A neutral tone.
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